So we've been in here trying to pass the time. "Really," Luan said, raising her eyebrows at her parents, "Because if you ask me parents don't go skinny dipping at night, or get the entire family kicked out of the hotel or make their children feel guilty for ruining a vacation that they already ruined." Any bad luck? And with that the parents ran into the room and closed the door. You going to dress me up as a chipmunk or a donkey!? Incredible from The Incredibles on the cover. Perhaps i was wrong to fall for such a deception, even for my age group. ", Luna: (opens her arms out) "Come here, bro." We said we were sorry. And she knew it wasn't about any massive gathering of one group for some kind of event because she would've been notified way ahead of time. I hate golf! Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. The kids, of course, still had some demands to give their parents. WE RUINED OUR WHOLE FAMILY!!! Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. And can you please unlock my room for me? # 17. the loud kamen rider by Dratinibro. I let my pride get the best to me! The family sees this and gasps in shock.). Luna: We just weren't thinking bro, we're sorry. Don't fight now! NO!" (Groans) I'll never live this down.(covers her face). Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. I hate concerts! "WELL, NOW THAT I KNOW HOW YOU KIDS FEEL ABOUT ME! Patching Things Up / Cheater by the Dozen. I hate that you don't love me anymore! Lincoln: I said NO! I HATE THIS!!! Immediately, all the kids started shouting at the parents and, as they did so, the other guests and employees in the spa took this opportunity to escape, they didn't want to stay and watch mayhem unfold. I just got so mad, that I stopped thinking and gave him a stupid idea and made us all push him away and lose almost everything. I'm giving it a Teen rating, because while there is no serious violence in this story, there are still some moments that might not be comfortable for youngsters to have to read (primarily shouting and lots of it). Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. Lincoln: I've had enough of this stupid costume! I don't even care about that anymore. Hearing that made the parents sigh in disappointment, they should've known their kids would break things and hoped the bill wouldn't be that much, but also knew that odds were that the bill was going to be massive. Guess they forgot to lock the windows. What if one of the neighbours saw Lincoln when he was sleeping outside and called the police? "Listen to what?" Eventually, Rita broke the long silence, saying, "Kids, I know you're angry at us for causing us to be kicked out of the hotel. It's too broken, even for me! Ruth yelled, "I DON'T WANT YOU OR YOUR UNGRATEFUL BRATS OR YOUR MANCHILD HUSBAND ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN? And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are). I even threatened you to go to my game! You were fine with me sleeping outside and being locked outside? ", Lynn: "After how badly I treated you? We were given the room." We don't know what we were thinking! She knew it didn't mean the weather, it was going to be bright and sunny all day. [Later, Lincolns room is unlocked and his furnature was back. I only told Leni, Luan, Lana, Lola and Lily. Just a head's up. Since the room is occupied, it should've shown up as that in the computer database. Scared as to what will happen if they say something wrong, eventually, Lincoln stepped forward and proceeded to say, "We're really sorry, sir. It's been a day since Lincoln tried to convinced them that he wasn't bad luck. Ever again. And even if you don't always succeed, your a good at it. I'm supposed to be the most special Loud of all. ", Pep:[dully] "Oh, I have that effect on people. "WELL I HATE ALL OF YOU, TOO!" ", Lincoln: "Oh, and I'm sorry for breaking your golf clubs, Lori. Post an update . As they leave, Jeffrey grabs Lynn Sr.'s arm, making him and his wife turn to him, he added, "And just so you know, your kids tore apart my lobby and the room you were staying in. ", Lincoln:[scared] "Lynn's right! ", Lucy: "We don't care, we'll watch anything you want. Today I'm doing a new story called 'Hall Monster Linka,' as you can tell this a story that features Linka Loud and her brothers. Let's go! ", [Later, they arrive back in their house.]. A Happy Ending New Reading List. "Well mom, you know what I think?" I'M A STUPID, SENSELESS BULLY!!! It said "Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Im going crazy over you." I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! ", Lincoln: "Lynn, don't say that. "Now go to your room," Lori said, pointing to their parents' bedroom, but when they still sat on the couch feeling guilty, she yelled, "NOW!" They got their answer when, suddenly, the door the spa was kicked open by someone's shoe. "WE HATE YOUR DISGUSTING PUDDING!" Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. Lincoln then explains to the viewers that with ten sisters, his schedule is always filled up, and . I hate that you sold my bed and everything I had! IM hoping to show this to Nickelodeon themselves someday. One Squirrel tosses the bat right at Lincoln by accident. Lucy: Lincoln's right! But dont worry, youre still a great writer. Lori: No, this is literally a terrible beach trip and I want to go home! During that time, the parents spent time talking to each of their children and spending time with them during their activities. "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing. "Same here." Said baby had an angry face and she glared at her mom and dad, "Poo poo!" (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. Lori yelled. Lincoln: Well, this was cool. LYNN LOUD HITS A GRAND SLAM!!! I can't believe they said they'd tease you for eternity. [The crowd cheers, the Loud family gasps in shock] Lynn: "No! But we have to know, how the heck have you been able to scoop us?" Katherine: With help from my boyfriend. "Wait," Lori interrupted with, "How could our parents get us kicked out just for taking a late night dip?" [Ronnie Anne handed Lincoln the card. I kinda have mixed feelings on this alternate ending, though Im leaning more on the approval side. Who do you think you are, calling us names and insulting us like that!? Ruth shouted back, insulted. Lola: (sniffles) He called us all dummies.and a waste of life. Luan: (starts to cry) He also called us monsters..that we don't care for anyone, but ourselves.. Lana: He did have a point. ", Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! I loved it. Lincoln: yeah. Suite and Sour / Back in Black. Eventually, one of them said, "Look officer. (turns his attention to Luna) "Luna, remember when we went to that SMOOCH concert? Experimental One Shot. (Tears up) Our only bro. Journal. She opens it, revealing all of the siblings' love interests.] ", Luna: "No, you were right. Luna: I dont know. Linky was right, the softball games are really stupid!!! Lincoln: But you were all so gullible and stupid! Lynn Sr.: KIDS, please! (She storms out of his room and into the hallway. Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. "No," Lynn Sr. and Rita responded with, not liking where this was going. Theres no need for such vile, hateful behaviour, elder brother! Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. Lincoln: (with angry tears) I'm throwing this stupid, disgusting thing away! "Lynn," Rita said, as she rose her head to meet with his, "Be honest with me, do you think we can earn our kids' trust back?" But i didnt expect to be ejected from the house and lose everything i had! AND I'M GOING TO GET A RESTRAINING ORDER JUST TO KEEP YOU AWAY!" "Do you have any idea how guilty you made us feel for possibly ruining your vacation for acting like ourselves?" Luan added. "You guys are literally going up the room right now and getting our stuff now!" And with that, Felix fell unconscious, thinking about what kind of damage those kids would do in their anger. Rita: You're all just angry with each other, when we get home, we'll talk about this properly. "And," Lori said, as she approached her parents, "if you want to act like irresponsible teenagers. Lynn Sr.: I can't believe we messed up so bad like this! Submit your writing. Lincoln: And, you locked me out of my room. No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. Are you no longer grounded to the room?" Lincoln is running through town, sweating, panting, tearful and very thirsty. Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. It was against the law. I hate that fact that you never make up for anything! Directors Kyle Marshall (segment Frog Wild) Chris Savino (segment No Such Luck) Writers Chris Savino The Louds. Especially, useless, pathetic, irresponsible, arrogant, ungrateful, spoiled, annoying, disgusting, stupid, superstitious IMBECILES!!! The siblings were heard saying numerous phrases but they all pretty had the same topic, 'What did we do to get kicked out already?' I do not own The Loud House, it belongs to Nickelodeon Animation, created by Chris Savino. Rita: Kids, your friends are here. Eventually Lincoln had the courage to say something, but was stuttering as he did so, "Areare you saying" he wanted to finished that sentence but felt that he couldn't. she responded back with, in a bit of an uninterested tone. Reacting to The Loud House is an ongoing series of The Loud House and The Casagrandes fics written by J Tom (or JTom09) in which many characters from both shows watch episodes of said shows. You're like some mindless mob and I hate that! "And just remember," Lori said, and then she and her siblings yelled one last time, "WE HATE YOU!" Lincoln: If superstitions and their own needs are all they want, I just won't be near them. "Lynn? This article should a part 2 episode in Season 5. We didn't just barge into the room. But this particular day, one of those children has been left out due to some "bad luck". ", Baseball Announcer: "I think you're rubbing off on me, Pep. I hate that you put your own lame pride and wants above everything else! This response shocked Lynn Sr. and Rita, Aunt Ruth was someone they could rely in case they went out of town and couldn't trust their kids to be home alone, hearing her say she doesn't want them anywhere near her home made them very worried. WE MAKE EVERYTHING WORSE!!! And if you do, I'll have you arrested! She then added, "I was just talking to my boyfriend when suddenly the sliding door closes and I can't get back in. We're supposed to be here until tomorrow. He managed to, but with a twist. (continues to cry. Lincoln: I hate this! Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. I can't let those crazy beasts see me! I can't even begin to imagine what they'll do their parents when they find them.'. (He gathers up a sleeping bag, pillow and snacks. He then grabs one of the sofa cushions and screams all his frustration into it.). Then, he opened it up. "I can't believe we didn't do that sooner," Lola responded back with, "She was nothing but an icky leech. But right now, no! The last one he is shown reading has the Ninja Steel Rangers from Power Rangers Ninja Steel on the cover. ], Family: "CONGRATULATIONS! No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane Cartoons Comics Funny Comics Loud House Rule 34 The Loud House Lincoln The Loud House Fanart Loud House Characters Funny Comic Strips Movies Coming Out Sonic And Amy More information . ", (Vanzilla is parked in the driveway. I hate that you made me feel like an outcast! The End. "WE HATE DOING ALL THOSE CHORES FOR YOU, YOU FILTHY SLOB!" [takes the mask off]"I was here the whole time! The siblings glared at her for a moment but saw she had a point, it didn't make sense to ground her or Lily for that matter, she was a baby, anything she did wasn't entirely her fault. NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. At the end of the day, the family's bonds couldn't have been any stronger, they talked more and spent more time bonding, even if it just watching something on the TV. Fortunately, there was no earthquake. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. No Such Luck, No Such Love is a The Loud House fanfic written by SpartanXHunterX which can be read here. Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." Cuts back to now. I just hurt Lynn! SQUIRRELS WIN! "Kids," Lynn Sr. got up from his seat, not realizing how angry the kids were, "What are you doing here? Making Lincoln think we don't care about him? Lynn ran outside and falcon punched him. Ive been a really nice guy with you for far too long! You tricked us in the first place. We feel so ashamed! "WE HATE THOSE STUPID CATS OF YOURS!" They thought that if they did or said something that this man didn't like, he would turn them to stone with his glare. Lincoln: That's what i always say. I can't believe I just hit one of my own sisters! "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. Do I mean nothing to you? Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. She playfully rolled her eyes. YOU'LL BE HAPPY TO KNOW YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT DEALING WITH ME OR MY CATS OR MY DISGUSTING PUDDING OR MY BUNIONS ANYMORE! (thinks for a minute) "Hmm. ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. "I can't believe you," Luna yelled, "I didn't even do anything yesterday and you still decided to ground me for no reason!" Post-Story Notice: Anyway. Whats next? QUIET! Lori said afterwards, knowing that everyone would've been confused by her talk. I hate that you never listen to reason! And after that, the whole room was silent. After one loss, she claims that Lincoln is bad luck. ", Leni: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Lisa: (beat) Okay, i admit, maybe there were many explanations to resolve such crazy, inane hooey. ", Lincoln: (nervously) "Well, there is this new Ace Savvy movie that just came out, but I know none of you like Ace Savvy like I do. We get it. Except for Lynn). ", Lincoln: "Guys, it's me!" I'm the Duke! Okay this episode has already been hated enough you can pretty much type in the rants for 'No such luck' and there will be a lot of those, I too hated this e. I hate pageants! Maybe I should just stop playing softball for a while. I'm calling the cops! Sell custom creations to people who love your style. As Maddie looked at the devastation, she thought back to the parents. *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. but I just really wanted to get it off my chest. I hate the fact that you never take responsibility! ", Lori: (with a broken voice) "What kind of monsters are we?!". Lola yelled. Understood?!" I cant believe you all locked me outside and sold all my things! Wow, Lincoln, I'm really sorry. The important thing is that we learn from them. Lynn: (clenches her fists) Say That Again.. Lincoln: No. ", Lynn: Oh Lincoln. (Tugs at it), (They tug and pull while the rest of the family backs away nervously). "I can't believe you kids just did that," Rita said, tears running down her face like a river. So, I plan to rectify that. The woman groaned and responded with, "It's not so much the dip that got them in trouble, rather it was their lack of swimwear that did." I'm not bad luck. And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. "What," Felix said, "what is it?" "Now I want an explanation," the man started with, as he stomps a few steps toward them, "As to all of this. After spending a good 10-15 minutes unpacking and putting everything back in the respective places in their rooms, the siblings walked into the living room and saw their parents were in fact still sitting on the couch. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. She hugged him back.] Lola: If it wasn't for Miss. Leni: Like, I don't like it here anymore either! Youve ruined my life and made me look like a melting snow cone!! Pre-Story Notice: Hello everyone. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. (Lisa turns to him) Whatever happened to Woman of Science, huh!?! I don't want you quit something you love because of me. Rita asked. Kick the . Keep on writing fics like this! I plan to do some more humorous parodies and some other stories that aren't going to be as serious as this one, so be on the lookout for that. Lucy. He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. Lincoln: I dont think I told you I was bad luck. "That we had to learn about all of this when hotel security barged up to our room due to numerous complaints!" We know you are!". But in hindsight, I guess I should've thought about it more before lying to you guys. Especially Lynn. alternateending stpatricksday theloudhouse lincolnloud theloudhousefanfiction stpatricksday2022 Requested by austin2468. Lincoln: (tearful) No! Nobody wanted to answer, but they knew things would get uglier if they didn't, so, Luna made the decision to walk slowly to the door and open it just enough to see who's out there but not to let them in. Just a heads up, this ending is going to feature a lot of yelling from the siblings and behavior/actions that some of you may believe that I'm representing the siblings in a bad light. ", Baseball Announcer: "Just look at our poor squirrels! Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! Lynn: (coughs) You know, if I knew that my superstitions would make Lincoln disown us I never would have started this nonsense in the first place. Lincoln: Lana. "What she said is, that you two are grounded for two months and you can only leave this house to head to work or to go to the supermarket."
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